An old work I'm really fond of, not for the caption itself, but because this was the one that put me in touch with my dear friend Karen from Karen Flashes :) I would not be here today if it wasn't for her ^-^
Karen turned off her laptop in frustration. Despite
all the time spent trying to come up with a decent caption to post on her
favorite site she couldn’t write anything that would satisfy her. The ideas
were all there, and her captions would usually receive a very good feedback
from the users, and yet she realized that she was growing tired of it. Every
caption was starting to feel the same as all the others, and she wasn’t getting
the same satisfaction she used to get whenever she published one of her works
and saw it being appreciated. At a certain point she was convinced she should
have quitted it. There was no point in going on if she kept feeling like that.
But that was just a moment. She loved what she did, and maybe that was just a
phase. “I just need some inspiration.” she told herself before leaving her house
and heading to the park like she always did when she needed inspiration.
A handful of minutes later she was sitting on a bench
at the park, looking around for the right target. She spotted a young couple
walking down the boulevard. The girl was stunning, gorgeous in her skirt and
tank top and with her luscious hair and the bright smile. “Those will do.” she
thought, and then she closed her eyes and focused on that girl. When she opened
her eyes she wasn’t sitting on the bench anymore. Instead she found herself
standing in the boulevard, with the guy’s arm embracing her and holding her tight
by the waist. She looked down at herself to see two perky breasts barely
contained by the girl’s revealing outfit, and she recognized the alien and yet
familiar feeling of long hair brushing against her shoulder, of the cool breeze
blowing on her long and toned legs, and of a thong running up her firm butt. She
smiled. The possession had worked perfectly as usual.
<<Are you okay honey?>>
She was surprised by the guy’s voice addressing her like
that, but she quickly composed himself.
<<Yes honey, I’m fine. But I don’t feel like
walking anymore, I want to go home.>>
It didn’t took her more than a second to get used to
the female voice coming out of her mouth, and looking up at her boyfriend she
smiled brightly. She could tell that she was confused by what she had just
said, but she knew how to make any perplexity disappear.
<<Please honey, I want to go home. I’m in the
mood for something special.>>
She smiled and winked at him, and she found it amusing
when the guy immediately nodded and lead her to their car. She had lost count
of how many times she had already done it. Guys are all the same, it is so easy
to manipulate them. A few minutes later they were both naked on their bed
having some foreplay.
Her new body felt so good. Her skin was so smooth, so
sensitive. The slightest touch would make her quiver, and the guy definitely
knew how to pleasure his girlfriend. Karen was letting out muffled moans of
pleasure as the guy kept teasing her sensitive nipples and fondling her perky
breasts, and she jolted as he slipped a finger inside her wet, throbbing pussy.
He then turned her around and made her bend over, and Karen smiled with
anticipation as she felt his hard cock start to push against her new female
parts. It went in easily, sending shiver up her spine to the back of her head,
and then he started to hump her faster and faster. No matter how many girls Karen
had already possessed, the first time she would have sex in a new body would
always feel different, and every single time the pleasure was incredible.
Suddenly the guy grabbed her by the arms, holding them
tight behind her back and starting to hump her faster and roughly. It hurt a
bit, but it felt so good, and that abruptness was so arousing. “This is new” she
thought to herself. Maybe that was the inspiration she was looking for. She
immediately started to come up with words to describe the feelings that were
going through her head in that moment, even though there are no words in the
English dictionary capable of describing how good sex feels for women. Then the
first few ideas for a story started to go through her mind. What will it be
this time? A body swap? A transformation? A curse? Will it be forced or will
the protagonist willingly change? There was no doubt that he would have loved
it in the end. Than all those thoughts faded to leave room only to the
pleasure, which struck her like a lighting as she started to reach climax.
Perhaps that was the reason why it was becoming so
difficult to keep writing caption. After all, what good is writing fiction when
you have tried the real deal and have the possibility to do so whenever you
want? But nonetheless she would not have quit captioning. Not yet. She felt
like that was the right thing to do. She had been blessed with amazing powers,
and had the possibility to leave up her wildest dreams. It was only fair that she
would at least share her experiences with other people who had the same
fantasies. And every like and comment she would get under her works made her feel
like she had made the day slightly better for someone else. Maybe one day she
would have really quitted and just chose a girl to possess forever to live the
life she had always wished for herself. But that was not the day.
"... No. Today would be the day that she opted to get some other guy's perception of something that Karen had become almost jaded in doing. Despite having the ability to borrow the body of whomever she chose, there seemed the possibility that exercising that power had been what led to her muted muse?
ReplyDeleteEven in the throes of this sensual seductress' climax, Karen looked back over her shoulder, still pinned beneath the strong grasp and urgent humping of her man, then uttered the enchantment...
"UhnGHAWD! WhaH-huh-h- What the huh-hell is..." the gasping voice of the woman beneath her stopped abruptly as the next wave of orgasm broke over her petite body and washed outward from deep inside the female genitalia to set the man now in control of his lover's flesh to convulsing and moaning in high-pitched whimpers of absolute pleasure!
Karen used her male strength to flip the shuddering mass of female flesh beneath her onto her back as she asked in his deep voice, "How did that feel, dude?!"
The look of utter shock that covered the chick's face as the man behind it looked down at his tits and the delightfully aching flatness between his smooth thighs - which sat exposed to the slick rod of his former manhood - while his pretty head stopped spinning and the reality of his new perspective sank into his consciousness with the question that his own voice had just posed was not surprising to Karen, but she wanted to hear in his own words, "Tell me what you felt... And what you're thinking, man!"
The man reached his delicate fingers to pinch his stiff nipples and caress his perky titties while he wrapped the sexy legs of his girlfriend's body around his former hips, whispering, "More! It feels like MORE!" he groaned then bit his pretty, puffy, lower lip and added, "P-please...put it back in and do that to me again?!"
Karen just nodded her head and smiled as she let the head of his cock tease at his slick labia before letting its head slip just inside..."
Hope you don't find this "epELLEogue" an unwelcome comment, Rachel - or Karen - but, it just seems like a feasible means of finding a broader range of input when we've been feeling a little writer's block in our efforts to keep our captioning fresh and exciting. (Trust me, girls, been feeling that way for a while.) Not to mention being one way of both sharing my thoughts on what your caption inspires, but also just letting my own muse flex her writing muscles.
Peace,Lust&Kinkiness!!!
Elle
Well, that was amazing! :) Unexpected but definitely welcomed ^-^ though you have put my writing skills to shame :P
DeleteIncredible work, really ^-^
Thank you, Rachel, but I would never presume to suggest my own writing is better than yours or Karen's or any other "captioneer". It is merely an expression of my own thoughts about what you have written.
DeleteAnd I hope you'll excuse me if I mention that, with your tongue sticking out like that, I might start to get hot-&-bothered at the thought that you look like a lesbian with a hard-on!
Peace,Lust&Kinkiness!!!
Elle
...Wow! I don't know what to say XD I guess I'm flattered :P Never would I have though someone would have thought about me in that way ^-^
DeleteHave fun with those fantasies then ;) You are very well excused :*
Aww, this is sweet, Rachel! I remember this caption and how we first got in touch on the old OTGC...you were so shy back then when emailing me for the first time. ^^
ReplyDeleteAnd Elle...wow, gotta love the delightfully tingling elELLEogue, which is a story in itself, heee---I think that your muse has a lot to teach my muse! Thanks to you both for offering these rays of inspiration, which brighten my day and help my muse to laugh and (hopefully very soon) sing. :D
I think back to those days with so much fondness ^-^ I'm so lucky I met you :*
DeleteThank you, Karen. And you know what; The best thing about some stories is that they never end since what has been written is simply what has been written so far!
DeleteHer is hoping that your muse imparts her imaginations through your fingers to share more of those inner portions of who you are to others holding similar tastes & desires! Perhaps your muse and mine might exchange their thoughts and forms again.
Peace,Lust&Kinkiness!!!
Elle