04 February 2018

Painful breakup

A request by 4alice based on a lovely caption by Marti (here's a link to the original caption: https://martitg.blogspot.ca/2017/12/break-up.html) Enjoy! ^-^
Mark was waiting on the bed with his head in his hands. He thought he would have felt more ready for what was about to happen, but now that the moment was finally approaching he felt his courage fade. He saw Heather entering the room. She was so beautiful, even with that sad expression on her cute face. They both knew what had to be done, but neither of them felt ready at all for it. It was Mark who finally broke the silence with a sigh. <<All right. I’m ready.>>

For the following minutes he did his best to be as romantic and passionate as possible. He knew that would have been the last night he would have made love to the girl he loved, and that from that day on he wouldn’t even have remembered her. He accepted his fate a long time ago, when she confessed to him her family’s secret. At first he didn’t believe that she was actually a witch, but she proved it to him, and he didn’t let that fact stop him. He loved her, and would have always loved her, even knowing what would have happened to him if they were to ever break up. However good intentions are not enough to keep a relationship float, and Heather’s love for Mark had started to fade a long time ago. She did her best to keep their relationship going, mostly because she felt sorry for what would have been of him if she didn’t do so, but she had enough. She couldn’t keep living like that, and one fatal day she finally told Mark she was going to break up with him.

Now the ritual had to be performed. The rules were clear. That night Mark would have been turned into a girl, and then his memories would have been erased. Mark knew that since the beginning. As he kept making love to Heather all the fond memories of their happy moments together started to flow to his mind. It was painful to know that soon he would have forgotten all of that, even more painful than knowing that he would soon have transformed. As he finally reached climax he felt all his energies being drained, and he collapsed on the bed. The transformation was quick and pain-free. He felt all of his body tingle, and he started to feel incredibly hot. He felt his hair grow and brush on his back, his skin becoming soft and hairless. He felt his butt getting rounder and softer, and his hips getting wider, while his belly became flat and toned and his waist narrow. His chest swelled as two round breasts started to form, and finally he felt his balls disappear into his groin and his dick shrivel, becoming smaller and smaller until he receded inside his body forming a pussy. The transformation was complete.

Mark had become Melanie, but that still wasn’t the end of it. He still had his memories, and the second part of the ritual had to be performed. That’s when Heather’s brother, Steven, entered the room. Melanie looked at him, and saw the cruel smirk on his face. He looked so amused and pleased when he saw the girl that used to be his sister’s boyfriend. He never liked Mark, and never missed a chance to remind him of what would have happened to him when he would have eventually broken up with Heather.
<<I’m going to enjoy fucking you when you will turn into a girl.>> he used to constantly say to him, and now the time had come.
Steven was standing there, with his already hard cock in his hand, eager to get down to it, and Melanie felt scared. However to her dismay she felt her newly acquired pussy already getting wet, just to the sight of his shaft. Maybe it was the magic making her feel eager for sex, or maybe it was her new body playing tricks on her mind. However she realized she didn’t feel ready for what was about to happen at all. Unfortunately for her, she had no choice.
<<All right babe, let’s do this.>>
<<Wait! Just a sec!>>
<<What now? You can’t back down.>>
<<I’m not going to back down, only…>>
<<What?>>
<<Let’s do it from behind. I don’t want to look at you. I want to look at Heather all the time.>>

As she heard those words, Heather’s heart skipped a beat. She didn’t really know why, but she felt even sadder for Mark. Maybe it was the sex they just had with a passion like they haven’t had in a long time, or maybe just now she was realizing how much in love she still was with him. However it was too late. There was no going back. She couldn’t do anything besides laying to his side and watching him as her brother started to fuck him. However for all the time Mark kept looking at her straight in the eyes, and they were so full of love. He loved her so much despite everything, and soon nothing would have been left of him. She couldn’t hold back, and started to kiss him passionately. Those lips were so soft, and tasted so sweet, and yet it felt just like she was still kissing his soon-to-be-ex-boyfriend. Finally Steven came inside of Melanie, and as she reached climax as well Heather saw that spark of love fade from her eyes. Mark’s mind was being erased, along with all the memories of ever having been a guy and of being in a relationship with Heather, and suddenly she disappeared, teleported by magic to her new apartment where she would have woken up the next morning to her new life.

Steven and Heather were left alone in the room, and in that lingering silence Heather realized what she had just given up. It was Steven who finally broke that silence.
<<I’m glad you finally got rid of him. He wasn’t good enough for you, I always told you so. I knew since the beginning it would have ended up like this. And yet, I have to admit that he makes a pretty hot girl. She was… beautiful. I think I like her. I… I may try to find her and ask her out. You wouldn’t mind it, would you? She may make very good girlfriend material. I mean, you always said he was a very gentle and sweet guy.>>
<<Y… Yes. Yes, he was.>>

Heather started to wonder whether she had made a decision too rushed, but it was too late. There was no going back, and she knew it, and she couldn’t help but start crying. Meanwhile somewhere else in town Melanie had just woken up feeling groggy. A number of strange thoughts, images, weird memories were going through her mind, like she had woken up from a very vivid dream. She shrugged it off and started to go about her normal day. However, even though she couldn’t understand why, she felt very melancholic for the whole day, and she felt like she was missing something. That was sure a strange, strange dream.

6 comments:

  1. Two things. 1) No disrespect for the original caption, but you took something ok and gave it style and flavor. Damn that was a good caption. I have trouble getting into these types of longer stories but I couldn't help but the the feels. Also, I was half expecting a kinda happy ending and the end kinda killed me. All in all keep it up, you're doing great and I love your captions

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    1. Thank you for the kind words :) I'm happy to know it was worth it to get through all the story :P

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    2. I couldn't agree more. You did a wonderfull job with it Rachel. I'm even quite jealous ;P

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    3. Well, I guess it was my turn this time to make you a little jealous ;)

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  2. Wow, this turned out beautifully. You really catch the feeling I wanted in this story. Thank you so much ^^

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    1. It was bittersweet to write, but since that was the aim I'm happy I was able to get it right for you ^-^

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